Ummm...yeah...
...I don't get it. I know this is done in the vein of those AWESOME cartoons, but I don't get what you're mocking here. Of course, you don't really need to know the source material to enjoy those cartoons, so even then I should be laughing at this, but I'm not. You need to establish the norm in the beginning of the cartoon a bit more before you bring in the over-the-top madness.